Crashing
Full of power
Breaking at the end
Vibrations go on
Never to be found again
Everything about it is moving
It moves everywhere
However it cannot leave
The shining sun
Glistening on top
It shines so fiercely
Yet always a constant
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good job!
ReplyDeleteit made me realize how much i want summer to come & painted a picture in my mind.
Great Job! It painted a nice image and made me feel like I was in the ocean!
ReplyDeleteDear Ms. Granger:
ReplyDeleteLoved the line "shines so fiercely." Excellent diction throughout the piece.
Sincerely,
Genevive Louise Noette